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boat-dealers / dealer-program-v1

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Decision and evidence

Leading cold copy with the reseller/dealer program, rather than the current live sequence's customer-facing 'protect the boat you sold' pitch, earns more replies because every unprompted dealer contact on record asked to become a reseller and the genuine boat-sales customer base has no case study to support the alternative pitch (lesson lesson-2026-09-17-05).

Audience: 518
Genuine boat dealers: 7
Reseller/installer: 4

Proof used in this copy

Dock Blocks runs a reseller/dealer program: dealers earn margin on docks their boat buyers need, showroom displays provided, quotes back inside 24 hours, dock delivered before the boat arrives
dock-blocks.com/dealers/ (live, 200) and the Drive dealer-program flyer
A reseller has bought by the truckload since 2014
Zoho Account Description, an account - Usable now only in anonymized form (no company name); needs Matt's OK to name the account. Standing instruction as of this build: never name it in prospect-facing copy, regardless of Matt's answer.
"We have not been a high-volume customer, however we get calls for your product all the time" (a marine retailer explaining why it wanted to carry the line)
Zoho Account Description, quoted inbound email, anonymized (no personal or company name) - Usable now anonymized; needs Matt's OK to attribute to a named account.
Dock Blocks builds floating docks and drive-on boat lifts for boat dealers across the US
Live sequence step 1 copy - Usable as a product-line description only, not as a claim of an established dealer customer base (real base is 7 accounts, 1 order).
60 drive-on boat lifts installed at a single marina
dock-blocks.com/testimonials/ (live, 200), St. Johns Yacht Harbor testimonial - Must be attributed to a marina, not a dealer. Excluded from the pilot's cold copy for exactly that reason (see strategy-spec Section 3).
Storage/winterization is a documented profit center and retention driver in the marine dealer trade press for 2026
MRAA / Boating Industry (external), see pains[]
39% of marine dealerships have no F&I manager/department
MRAA, The Untapped Potential of F&I
Dock Blocks has operated for 15 years (2011-2026)
Drive dealer flyer
Lifetime Limited Warranty, Made in the USA, Environmentally Friendly, GSA Approved, ISO 9001 manufacturing process
Drive dealer flyers
Sold across North America and throughout the Caribbean
Drive dealer flyer - Flag against the 14-contact Monaco/France/UK slice in the send file before citing the Caribbean/international half in copy sent to non-US contacts.
A dock or lift order is typically quoted within 24 hours and delivered before the boat arrives, usually inside 2 weeks
Drive dealer flyer - Verified for the reseller-program pitch; not yet verified for a direct boat-dealer buyer, so scope it to the reseller context.

Pains this addresses

Each step, as the recipient reads it

Step 1 new_thread wait 0 days (Day 0) 0 links
Dock Blocks dealer program at your organization

Hi there,

I'm Matt with Dock Blocks. We run a dealer program: dealers earn on the docks their own boat buyers need. Wanted to see if that's worth putting in front of your organization.

Worth a look, or is there someone else on your side who handles vendor relationships like this?

Matt
(877) 478-8440
dock-blocks.com

subject_variant_1: Dock Blocks dealer program at {{company}} (used in body above)
subject_variant_1b: Becoming a Dock Blocks dealer
subject_variant_1c: Reseller program, {{company}}
Step 2 reply_to_thread wait 3 days (Day 3) 1 link - dock-blocks.com/dealers/
(no subject - reply in thread)

Hi there,

Here's how it works: quotes come back inside 24 hours, we provide the showroom displays, and we deliver the dock before the boat arrives, usually inside two weeks. A reseller in Maine has been buying this way since 2014. One installer who reached out put it simply: "we get calls for your product all the time." The details are at dock-blocks.com/dealers/.

Does that fit how you already work with your vendors, or is this a different conversation on your end?

Matt
(877) 478-8440
dock-blocks.com

Step 3 new_thread wait 4 days (Day 7) 1 link - dock-blocks.com/drive-on-boat-lifts/
Where Dock Blocks fits alongside what you sell

Hi there,

Dock Blocks has built floating docks and drive-on lifts for 15 years, sold across North America. It sits alongside what you already sell. Your buyers still need somewhere to keep the boat.

If you want to see the product line first, it's at dock-blocks.com/drive-on-boat-lifts/.

Worth a short call, or would you rather look through that first?

Matt
(877) 478-8440
dock-blocks.com

subject_variant_2: Where Dock Blocks fits alongside what you sell (used in body above; replaces the v1 primary, which read as a literal follow-up line)
subject_variant_2b: 15 years of docks and lifts, sold across North America (sourced to claims for 15 years in business and sold across North America)
subject_variant_2c: One more on the reseller side
Step 4 reply_to_thread wait 7 days (Day 14) 0 links
(no subject - reply in thread)

Hi there,

Haven't heard back, so I'll leave this here for now.

If it's not the right time, no problem. If there's someone else I should be talking to about the dealer program, point me their way.

Matt
(877) 478-8440
dock-blocks.com

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